Oooo, I get first word on this one!

I must say, I'm not sure I get that second stanza. Is it a girl thing? Or am I just being dumb?

Having said that, I like your poetry. It's honest. So quit trying to make excuses for it. My favourite line is definitely "mutinous eyes". That's magic.

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I really thought I’d gone to her house, you know, to heal our spiritual divide. But it turns out I was just gagging for a shag. Those two are SO similar. - Coupling

You mean the "All I ask is one little step; Move from that pink ring dividing the inner circle from the outside of the inside," bit? Well, that's a really cryptic reference to something. You know when you're over someone, but there's an image of them burned into you, like you see their name on a piece of paper and your mind fills with images of them and things you've done together? Well I'm a really visual person and, this is sort of silly, but I always imagine my heart as its own little world, with layers and layers dividing it. Some people linger outside, others get deeper and deeper. In my mind's view of this heart, (where everything is shades of pink, lol) there is a line dividing friend and more than friend. So that one little step is referring to taking that step back to the friend side if the line.

It's about a guy, of course. A guy I want to just stay friends with, but little things about him tempt me. We a had a sort of intense encounter, but I backed off. He wants more, but I want to go back to being just friends... it's difficult, because part of me wants him, and he knows it.

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Like art, revolutions come from combining what exists into what has never existed before. -- Gloria Steinem

Ah. yes. Brilliantly told. struck a bit of a chord as well recently.
so yes. good-o. ( i have mutinous eyes.) It hurts, don't it.

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I just killed a clown.

It does.

*worried face*
I hope your mutinous eyes don't get you into any trouble. I'll cross my fingers for you...

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Like art, revolutions come from combining what exists into what has never existed before. -- Gloria Steinem

Delayed favourite

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I just killed a clown.

my thanks.

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Like art, revolutions come from combining what exists into what has never existed before. -- Gloria Steinem

hehe, you weirded out *dark-angelic but yeah, don't worry about it, devmeets are in the works. if not during your time, just for you then

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I just killed a clown.

hahaha...for some reason, I thought your comment was from 12monthsofwinter, and I thought KARMA silentvoyces has commented here... So I had to comment on the page. It all makes sense now.
Please, don't have a devmeet just for me. Too... much... pressure... plus, I don't know many deviants in Australia anyway. But if there's something going on, I'd love to show up.

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Like art, revolutions come from combining what exists into what has never existed before. -- Gloria Steinem

You understand that now we are going to have to have a devmeet for you?

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I fail to see how a boy can 'be' emotive hardcore, let alone that him being that genre of hardcore makes his kissing another of said genre more arousing than two boys of no particular genre partaking in a similar act. ~onemorespoon